We Got Set A Task On A Couples Play Script And We Had To End Up Making Our Own Story
MOLLY
Sits At The Bustop
ZOE
Sits Next To Her & Says Sorry MOLLY I Have Bad News
MOLLY
Well What Is It Then ZOE?
ZOE
Im Very Sorry But Your Boyfriends Cheating On You
MOLLY
OMG With Who..You? How Could You? Your Ment To Be My Best mate
ZOE
No MOLLY You Should Think Like That I Don’t Go Out With Him I Wouldn’t Touch Him His Yours I Don’t Want To Use Our Friendship Over Boys
MOLLY
ZOE I Cant Do This Anymore Ive Had Enough I Dont Know What To Do I Cant Face This Anymore....If You Like Him Just Tell Me Because I Dont Wanna Loose A Friendship Over A Stupid Silly Relationship.
ZOE
MOLLY Im Being 100% Honest To You?! It Isnt Me I Dont Know Who The Girl Is But When We Find Out You Can Do Whatever You Want To Her And Its Your Choice What You Can Put Up With And Not..
MOLLY
I Cant Do It Anymore Im Gonna Say Its Over I Cant Face This My Life Always Gets Ruined Over Silly Little Stupid Things.
Reiss
ReplyDeletePASS
you have used some of the formatting rules for a script. You have used the right font and put the characters' names in capitals
To improve this, it is really important to get the formatting and alignment right so that it is easier to read.
Make sure that the character names are indented twice and the dialogue once. This makes it easier for actors to see where their bits are and it makes sure they don't' accidentally read out the actions.
Go back to the Unit 2 > Script writing folder if you need to look at examples to improve this work
Mr Monahan
PS Could you also make sure you update your blog with all your missing work?
Really A Pass?
ReplyDeleteThats How You Told Me 2 Do Write The Script And Do The Format.
Reiss,
ReplyDeleteRead my feedback carefully. I have told you the reasons why it is a pass and what you can do to improve it. Try making the improvements - I'm sure I will give you a higher grade when you've followed those instructions