Friday, 9 November 2012

My Feedback From Ms Morris

Reiss- Group work/discussion

well done, you clearly listen to the ideas of others and make relevant contributions to the meetings.

P

Target- listen to the details of the ideas being discussed and build on the ideas of others. you are working with some imaginative people but i am sure you can help make their ideas even better!





Reiss- Treatment

Good work, you have described the key events that will happen in your pilot show. well done for mentioning the fact the camera interviews the characters, you have linked in the mockumentary conventions.

M-

Target- explain why things happen




Reiss- good work, you have used the appropriate conventions needed for a script

M-

target- Make sure the script includes information about the interview scene.






No comments:

Post a Comment